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document #308

NSI CS document version 2.1

Added by Guy Roberts over 6 years ago. Updated almost 3 years ago.

Status:published Start date:05/04/2016
Priority:Normal Due date:
Assignee:Greg Newby % Done:

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Document Type:Proposed Recommendation

Description

Hi Greg,

Please find attached our draft NSI CS version 2.1. This document obsoletes version NSI CS 2.0. The new version includes updates to support the updated NSI policy, refines some functions and includes experiences based on implementation.

I am working on a delta document to show the differences between the two versions of the protocol. I will add this document to this Redmine issue shortly.

We would like this version to go out for public comment soon to give the community a chance to give their input.

Regards,
Guy

draft-nsi-cs-protocol-2dot1-v11.docx (4.9 MB) Guy Roberts, 05/04/2016 11:02 AM

draft-nsi-cs-protocol-2dot1-v12.docx (4.8 MB) Guy Roberts, 07/05/2016 12:11 PM

draft-nsi-cs-protocol-2dot1-v13.docx (4.7 MB) Guy Roberts, 12/14/2016 12:32 PM

draft-nsi-cs-protocol-2dot1-v14-jhm.docx (4.8 MB) Guy Roberts, 09/18/2019 07:11 AM

draft-nsi-cs-protocol-2dot1-v15.docx (4.8 MB) Guy Roberts, 09/19/2019 03:01 AM

GFD-R-P.237.docx (4.8 MB) Greg Newby, 12/15/2019 01:05 PM

GFD.237.pdf (5.9 MB) Greg Newby, 12/15/2019 01:05 PM

History

Updated by Greg Newby over 6 years ago

Dear Guy,

Apologies for not responding immediately. Per the standards telecon on May 17, my understanding is there is a desire to move the other pending NSI documents forward.

I think that if you can upload the delta document, we can get it reviewed by standards council for posting to public comment. Thanks.

Updated by Greg Newby over 6 years ago

  • Status changed from submitted to AD review
  • Assignee changed from Greg Newby to Richard Hughes-Jones

Per the standards council telecon July 1:

1. For the authors: Please submit a clean document (no "track changes"), update the copyright date to 2016. Please update the document with the correct header, and copyright statement. These are in the "templates" area of Redmine.

2. For Richard, we need AD confirmation this is ready to move to public comment.

Updated by Guy Roberts over 6 years ago

Greg,

Please find attached version 12 with the following changes:

clean document (no "track changes"), updated the copyright date to 2016 and correct header, and copyright statement.

Guy

Updated by Greg Newby about 6 years ago

  • Status changed from AD review to initial review
  • Assignee changed from Richard Hughes-Jones to Jens Jensen

Thanks for this. It needs standards council review, prior to public comment. We will add it to the next agenda.

Updated by Greg Newby about 6 years ago

  • Status changed from initial review to public comment
  • Assignee changed from Jens Jensen to Andre Merzky

Correction: This was already approved by AD & Standards Council.
(Andre) Please create a public comment tracker.

Updated by Richard Hughes-Jones about 6 years ago

  • Status changed from public comment to author action
  • Assignee changed from Andre Merzky to Richard Hughes-Jones

The NSI group and Richard HJ are still working on this doc

Updated by Greg Newby about 6 years ago

Richard clarified that we await author action on a next iteration of this document. So, this is not yet ready for public comment.

Updated by Guy Roberts almost 6 years ago

this update contains minor corrections spotted by developers.

Also removed Appendix F.

Version 13 of this document is now ready to go to public comment

Updated by Greg Newby over 5 years ago

  • Status changed from author action to AD review

Per the standards council meeting of May 12, this item awaits area director review prior to entering public comment. #323 will accompany it.

Updated by Greg Newby over 4 years ago

  • Status changed from AD review to public comment
  • Assignee changed from Richard Hughes-Jones to Greg Newby

Per the standards council teleconference on May 11 2018, this is now approved for public comment.

Updated by Greg Newby almost 4 years ago

  • Status changed from public comment to author action
  • Assignee changed from Greg Newby to Richard Hughes-Jones

Authors/editors: There was a public comment pointing out an issue. Would you please take a look, and then either respond and/or provide an updated final version for publication? Thanks...

Updated by Greg Newby almost 4 years ago

I sent a separate status email to Guy, in case he didn't see the redmine notification.

Updated by Greg Newby over 3 years ago

There is still no response. Per the public comments, the document needs a schema update before it can be published. Once that is received, #308 and #323 will be published together.

The public comments are here: https://redmine.ogf.org/projects/editor-pubcom/boards/41

Updated by Greg Newby about 3 years ago

I sent another email follow-up to Guy. This is still awaiting action from the contributor.

Updated by Guy Roberts about 3 years ago

Thanks Greg for prompting us on this.

We have now incorporated the pubic comments and made the following additional changes:

- updated the References section.  It was a bit outdated and some of the numbers pointed to the wrong references.
- added an additional reference to the NSI CS 2.1 XSD in GitHub.

Regards,
Guy

Updated by Guy Roberts about 3 years ago

Greg,

The advantage of the delay in publication is that we NRENs coding to the standard, so we have been making some minor adjustments. I have updated the document to version 15 (attached) with the following changes to section 9.3.8:

The internet2 implementation found an issue with my UUID specification in the document and the schema. In the following version only allows for lowercase characters:

urn:uuid:[a-f0-9]{8}-[a-f0-9]{4}-[a-f0-9]{4}-[a-f0-9]{4}-[a-f0-9]{12}

The internet2 implementation was the first to provide upper case characters and break the SURFnet aggregate implementation. I checked the standards and realized I forgot the uppercase characters in the UUID specification. It should appear as follows:

urn:uuid:[a-fA-F0-9]{8}-[a-fA-F0-9]{4}-[a-fA-F0-9]{4}-[a-fA-F0-9]{4}-[a-fA-F0-9]{12}

Guy

Updated by Greg Newby about 3 years ago

Thanks for this, Guy. The standards council took a quick look in today's meeting, and we will be ready to approve publication at our next fortnightly meeting.

Two inquiries:
1. Author affiliations are not listed in the header. Would you like to add these? It's not a requirement, but is typically done. You could also add a section towards the end that lists affiliations.

2. Since you have made the further change with UUID, should you also upload #323, the Delta document? https://redmine.ogf.org/issues/323

Both documents (323 & 308) need to have the correct current copyright statement added (from #152 at www.ogf.org). I will do this, unless you happen to do it sooner. I will also assign GWD numbers and adjust the headers/dates, as part of the final publication process.

Thanks again. I'm looking forward to publishing these. Best,
Greg

Updated by Guy Roberts about 3 years ago

Hello Greg,

Thanks for following this up.

1. Author affiliations are not listed in the header. Would you like to add these? It's not a requirement, but is typically done. You could also add a section towards the end that lists affiliations.
- Yes, could you please add these affiliations: Chin Guok and John MacAuley: ESnet, Guy Roberts: GEANT Tomohiro Kudoh: tba... he has changed organizations. I will ask him which he prefers to use.

2. Since you have made the further change with UUID, should you also upload #323, the Delta document? https://redmine.ogf.org/issues/323
- I will ask John M to updated.

Both documents (323 & 308) need to have the correct current copyright statement added (from #152 at www.ogf.org). I will do this, unless you happen to do it sooner. I will also assign GWD numbers and adjust the headers/dates, as part of the final publication process.
- Yes, please do thanks.

Guy

Updated by Greg Newby about 3 years ago

This will be GFD-R-p.237 when published.

We are just waiting for the updates to the UUID section in the diff document.

Updated by Chin Guok about 3 years ago

UUID section in diff document (draft-nsi-cs-v2.0-to-v2.1-delta-v11) has been added.

Updated by Greg Newby about 3 years ago

Thanks! I will move these forward through the publication pipeline.

Updated by Greg Newby about 3 years ago

  • Status changed from author action to to be published
  • Assignee changed from Richard Hughes-Jones to Greg Newby

Updated by Greg Newby almost 3 years ago

This is now published and online at www.ogf.org. It was also announced by email to the OGF community.

I am attaching the final .docx and .pdf. The only changes I made were to headers/footers, and to use the current (2012) IP/copyright statement.

Thanks again for the great work by the contributors to this document!

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