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Not that people should be using this version at the moment, but in case of future development, I've corrected the trademark text and also the date for publication of the OGSA Glossary.

Removed extraneous line breaks that had somehow found their way into the middle of a paragraph on p34.

Incorporated final changes from the OGSA Glossary 1.6 and corrected the URL for that document.

Accepted changes & made some minor formatting corrections. The round ball is now polished - I think we're ready to submit.

Changes to the federation chapter in response to comments received from Clive Davenhall.

Corrected argruments to some of the Federation operations.

Version 42 with all changes accepted

Updated references; removed references to unpublished documents.

Fixed minor comments found by Allen's final pass. These included two cases where the description of an operation was repeated whole.

Addressed public comments by Jens Jensen. Also added to "Scope" section.

Got rid of capitalised MUSTs, MAYs, etc in the data access section so as not to appear as normative - now in lower case. Made punctuation across the operations tables consistent.

Many typographical errors fixed that were noted in public comments. Hiro's request for an "Information Service" section was addressed.

Revised the definition of "data consistency" in the glossary

Modified in the light of public comments.

Final changes - mostly formatting. Added SRM reference. Some extra chest beating in the conclusion.

Added mappings to byteio and dais operations.

Storage Mappings to SRM added

Completed missing references. More format changes to match OGF template. Filled in gaps in list of specifications referenced. Added authors' addresses. some minor tidying.

Finished format changes to match latest OGF template. Fixed the section descriptions in section 1.4. Made use of Word styles more consistent.

Interim version - completed list of specifications referred to; added summary tables of operations; began changing format to match latest OGF template. I then ran into Word trouble; in the next version I accepted all changes in this version so that Word could continue.

Removed comments in section on "Specifications Used", adding new reference stubs where needed. Moved this section after the one mapping operations to specifications.

Unified styles somewhat, especially of the descriptions of operations. Replaced Figure 8 with a new version. Added notes to Section 15 ("Specifications referred to").

Updated References and Glossary. Fixed Figure 9. Fixed issues raised by Mario's two comments. Deleted some text in 3.7 (Policy). There is one unresolved REF that someone should add.

Changes from the last telcon. Moved policy operations to new subsection, added an operations table, added some words in the conclusion (can be changed/dumped), read through section 2 - made two new comments (sorry) and changed bits of text here and there.

Got rid of some of my comments and made a number of small corrections. Added one new comment.