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Various changes based on 16 August 2007 call. Added a paragraph about data consistency in the seciton on transformations in the federation chapter.

3.2.2 & 3.2.3: Abstract name -> EndpointIdentifier (per Mark Morgan - change in WS-Naming).

Fixed dangling sentence in 15.1

Changes from comment review through chapter 10. Resolved most unresolved external references.

Reordered sections 2.4 to 2.6/ Added some introductory and summary information in chapter 2. Changes to the federation section to better reflect that the factory operation creates an empty federation and all changes are via other operations on a federation.

More changes in respose to comments. These include moving several subsections of section 2.

Changes to match revised glossary definitions. Also some responses to comments in the document.

Quick review. Accepted most of Allen's changes. Removed some of my comments and left others for telcon discussion. Made a couple of minor changes here and there.

Reviewd V16 changes. Accepted many. Added comments and prose in response to some proposed changes and some comments.

Comments up to the beginning of the appendices.

Checkpoint - looked over the data transfer section. Lots of small issues. Need to disambiguate between data access and data transfer - have put a suggestion to discuss at the next telcon.

Checkpoint - commented up to the end of Section 5.

Checkpoint - have made changes up to the end of chapter two and made a couple of comments.

Rewrote the catalog/registry section.

Rewrote the cache section.
Set language to US English.
Added missing definitions to glossary.

Updated Policy section to make the role of service advertised policy vs. policy specified in an operation. I also took the opportunity to add a few comments about policy negotiation.

Artifact artf5828 : Create a "VO" Section
Artifact artf5827 : VO Role in Security
Added new section to chapter 2 on VOs. Reviewed Security and Storage sections - no changes made.

Artifact artf5831 : Turn section 11.5 (Federation: Updates to Policy)...
Moved text from the Federation policy section to the Policy section in chapter 2.
Updated the Federation policy section in the context of what was moved to chapter 2.

Artifact artf5829 : Check Interaction of 8.7 (Storage & Transfer) and Transfer
8.7 still seems valid to me. I added a paragraph to tie it back to Transfer.

Artifact artf5820 : 2.2: Data Access vs. Data Transfer
Added a few sentences to try and add to the clarification that was already there. I thought that this section was pretty well written frankly.

Artifact artf5821 : 2.2: Definition of "dataset"
Tweaked definition of dataset in 2.2 and the glossary in the light of the Dublin Core definition by changing "syntax" to "defined syntax".

Number of minor correctsion, some references added and more comments removed from the telcon on the 09-March-2007.

Removed comments from the telcon on the 1st March 2007.

Have made various modifications based on discussion at OGF19 on the data acces section. Have also shortened the data access section in the appendix but have not done the mapping. Added some changes that Allen did to the Replication Storage Section.

Some minor changes in various places in teh document. This version has had all changes accepted as the document was getting unmanageable in Word.

Merges in changes to Data Access, Storage and Security sections.

As a result of feedback from GGF18, I've replaced the two diagrams in sections 2.1-2.3 with three diagrams. These better group the concepts under discussion. I've also changed the diagrams in section 1.1 and section 5 to use the same conventions. (I intend to change the Scenarios document to match and have incorporated some of the Scenarios styles where they improved on the ones here).

I have also revised the data description section (section 5) to put the discussion of registries in a separate subsection and to make the whole section more consistent.